Dearest contributors and students,
Please be patient ya for your comments to your masterpieces ^^ still trying my best to read all the essays ^^ For those who still don't have any comments for their first essay, my life in MMU, can you just leave a comment or type your link under this post so that I can double check? Thanks ya ^^
Have a great day :)
Luv,
Ms Jasline
6 comments:
waikian1108.blogspot.com
waikian frm pm11
http://only-tehohice.blogspot.com/
tay kheng guan from pm12
http://sade-lee.blogspot.com/
adi saw ur comment in my mail box.....
you can leave comment in my blog adi as i adi change my blog's setting...
Mr Kheng Guan,
I have just read your blog but can't seem to post any comments there...
For the essay on classes you detest, it is good as all the topic sentences are there but the thesis statement is not there, it should be the last sentence in your introduction :) There are also several spelling errors..ehem...must spell check first ya your assignment...
Can you change your setting so that I can comment?
Thanks
Luv,
Ms Jasline
http://joycelynxuan.blogspot.com/
PM11 tansiowshen
www.edwardkang1991.blogspot.com
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